Editorial Services

The Work

We begin with what’s actually on the page.

Before anything is revised, we look at what’s actually on the page. What the story is trying to do, where it’s already working, and where it may be breaking down.

From there, our work is shaped around the story itself—a collaborative process built through close reading, discussion, and a shared understanding of what needs to change and why.

You’re not handed a set of corrections.

You’re given a clear view of how the story is functioning, what’s strengthening the reader’s experience, what may be interrupting it, and how to move forward intentionally.

I take on a limited number of projects at a time so I can stay closely engaged with each story as it develops.

This is how the work holds.

Each story calls for something different.

What happens next depends on where you are in the process—and what the story needs.

Service Pathways

Story Development:

  • Deep structural work focused on how the story unfolds emotionally, relationally, and narratively across its larger arc.

    Story development strengthens the relationship between character, pacing, emotional consequence, reader immersion, and long-form story movement—helping the story feel intentional, cohesive, and emotionally earned.

  • Strong stories don’t rely on isolated moments alone.

    They build meaning over time through escalation, emotional continuity, character choices, and the way readers experience the larger movement of the narrative as a whole.

    This stage focuses on identifying where emotional momentum begins drifting, where important moments lose impact, or where the deeper intentions of the story are not yet fully reaching the page.

    Areas of Focus May Include:

    • character development and evolving arcs

    • relational dynamics and emotional continuity

    • pacing, escalation, and narrative movement

    • point of view and reader perception

    • scene sequencing and emotional payoff

    • long-form cohesion across the larger arc of the story

    • strengthening immersion, tension, and reader investment

    • a detailed editorial letter

    • in-manuscript comments and developmental guidance throughout

    • revision suggestions and thought-prompter questions tied to key moments

    • clear, actionable guidance for moving into revision

    • a post-edit conversation to discuss the feedback, answer questions, and help clarify next steps moving forward

    The goal is not to force stories into rigid formulas, but to better understand how character, structure, emotional consequence, and reader experience are already interacting within the work—and strengthen those relationships in ways that feel true to the story itself.

  • This work is collaborative and diagnostic.

    Rather than applying a fixed framework, I draw from established craft tools and editorial practice—adapting the approach to the structure, scale, and goals of the story itself.

    Each project, each storyteller, is treated individually, with attention to how the story functions as a complete system.

Line Edits & Refinements:

  • Focused refinement of how the story is experienced at the sentence and scene level.

    Line editing strengthens clarity, emotional flow, voice consistency, dialogue, rhythm, and prose-level continuity—helping the language fully support the larger movement of the story without flattening the individuality of the voice on the page.

  • Line editing works at a closer lens than developmental editing, focusing on how pacing, characterization, emotional movement, and reader immersion are experienced moment to moment through the prose itself.

    I’m paying close attention not only to sentence-level clarity, but to how each scene functions within the larger emotional rhythm of the chapter and story as a whole. Dialogue, tonal shifts, emotional inflection, continuity, and narrative flow all shape how readers interpret and experience the work over time.


    Areas of Focus May Include


    • sentence-level clarity, rhythm, pacing, and emotional flow

    • dialogue and tonal refinement

    • prose-level continuity across scenes and chapters

    • voice consistency and readability

    • strengthening immersion and reader momentum

    • reinforcing characterization, atmosphere, and emotional inflection through prose

    This stage often works best once the underlying structure of the story is already functioning well, allowing the prose-level work to deepen immersion rather than compensate for larger developmental issues.

  • While this process works at the line level, I’m still reading with attention to the larger emotional and narrative movement of the story—ensuring the prose continues reinforcing characterization, escalation, atmosphere, and reader experience across the manuscript as a whole.

    This stage may include:

    • in-manuscript edits and comments throughout

    • sentence-level revision suggestions for clarity, rhythm, pacing, and emotional flow

    • a post-edit conversation to discuss the feedback, answer questions, and help clarify next steps moving forward

    • follow-up craft guidance where helpful

Story Consulting:

  • Stories are developing in more ways, across more formats, and over longer periods of time than ever before.

    Not every project begins with a traditional developmental edit—and not every writer works best through rigid editorial stages alone.

    Some stories evolve through ongoing conversation, live revision, serialized release schedules, collaborative troubleshooting, or long-form development that continues shifting as the work grows.

    Story consulting is designed to support that process:

    offering flexible, conversation-based guidance for writers navigating evolving projects, structural challenges, revision decisions, and long-form storytelling in real time.


  • Much of this work happens through conversation.

    Writers do not only lose clarity around what is happening on the page—they can lose access to the deeper emotional movement, direction, or momentum underneath the story itself.

    Part of my role is helping identify what is already present but not yet fully clear, strengthening the connections between ideas, and helping the larger shape of the story come back into focus as the project continues evolving.

    This work is especially useful for:

    • early-stage story development

    • projects between major draft stages

    • targeted problem-solving and revision guidance

    • long-form, multi-arc, or serialized storytelling

    • writers navigating evolving projects over time

    • stories that feel close, but not yet fully aligned on the page

    Areas of Focus May Include:

    • clarifying narrative direction and emotional movement

    • troubleshooting structural or pacing challenges

    • strengthening character and relationship dynamics

    • navigating revision decisions and story pivots

    • evaluating reader feedback within the larger long-term arc of the story

    • maintaining continuity and escalation across serialized or evolving projects

    • brainstorming future installments, expansions, or narrative possibilities

    • strengthening immersion, tension, and reader investment over time

  • This is where we work together, in real time, shaping the story as it develops.

    This stage may include:

    • live, conversation-based sessions

    • real-time feedback, discussion, and developmental guidance

    • collaborative problem-solving and revision support

    • follow-up notes or next-step guidance where helpful

    • flexible discussions tailored to the current needs of the story and projecttem description

KIND WORDS FROM AUTHORS

“She helped me understand my characters in a way I hadn’t before—and made me love them more.”

-Stephanie Dray

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Complimentary Consultation Call

Before we talk about services, let’s talk about your story.

In your one-hour call, we look closely at your work and what you’re trying to build.

This is a focused session designed to give you clear, immediate insight into what’s working, what isn’t fully carrying through, and where the story might go next.

During the call, we may:

• look at submitted pages in detail
• clarify direction and structure
• work through specific challenges or problem areas
• identify next steps for revision

This call helps determine the most useful way to move forward—and gives you grounded, usable direction right away.

Each project also includes a final conversation to walk through the work together—so you’re never left interpreting feedback on your own.

The Approach

  • I approach story as a system.

    Not just a sequence of events, but a structure where character, pacing, point of view, emotional development, and reader experience are constantly affecting one another.

    Craft is what allows those elements to build together over time rather than functioning independently on the page.

    For me, craft is not a collection of isolated techniques. It is the design of reader experience. Every choice in a story carries weight: what is shown, what is withheld, how relationships develop, how meaning is revealed, and how emotional consequences accumulate across the larger arc of the narrative.

    When I read, I’m not only looking at plot. I’m looking at how relationships evolve, how character motivations shape decisions, how perception influences behavior, and how the reader is experiencing those moments as they unfold. I also pay close attention to how stories communicate meaning across different readers, perspectives, and lived experiences, and how those choices shape interpretation over time.

    That means asking questions at the character level—about emotional logic, contradiction, desire, self-perception, and what a character understands about themselves versus what the reader is being allowed to see. It also means looking at where layers are deepening the story and where something may be interrupting that effect.

    Often, when a story begins to lose momentum or emotional impact, it isn’t because of a single weak scene. It’s because elements of the story are no longer reinforcing one another, and the resulting strain begins to ripple outward across the narrative.

    When those elements align, a story feels immersive, emotionally coherent, and inevitable.

    When they don’t, something feels off—even if it’s difficult to name.

    My role is to help identify those patterns, give language to the craft already present in the story, and strengthen the emotional and structural connections that allow the narrative to carry its full weight.

  • House of Braus was built around the kind of editorial partnership I saw working best—and the kind that has become harder to find.

    Each project is approached individually, with attention not only to the story itself, but to how the author thinks through structure, revision, and craft. Most work begins with a conversation, where we look at your story, your goals, and what kind of support will be most useful.

    I don’t treat feedback as instruction to obey. I offer recommendations, context, and craft-based reasoning so you can make informed decisions about your own work and develop a deeper understanding of what the story is doing beneath the surface.

    The goal isn’t only to strengthen the current project. It’s to help you build a stronger relationship with your craft as the work continues to evolve.

  • Every author approaches revision differently.

    I don’t simplify the work itself, but I do adapt how feedback is communicated and structured so it remains clear, usable, and aligned with how different authors process information and revision.

    My background in teaching heavily informs how I approach developmental communication, scaffolding, and long-term craft growth.

    The goal is not simply to identify issues, but to provide feedback that helps authors understand what they’re seeing, make informed decisions, and continue building their skills over time.

  • Most authors come in not knowing exactly what they need—and they don’t need to.

    We start by looking at the work itself.

    Every project is approached individually based on the story, the stage it’s currently in, and the type of support that will move it forward most effectively. Some projects fit neatly within a service category. Others require a more collaborative or customized approach.

    The categories on this site are starting points, not limitations. Part of the initial consultation process is determining what kind of support will be most useful for both the story and the author behind it.

  • For me, narrative ethics is the understanding that stories shape reader experience through thousands of interconnected choices—what is shown, what is withheld, how meaning is framed, whose perspective is centered, and how emotional consequences are carried across the arc of the story.

    Part of that includes trauma-informed reading. Stories rich in character often move through grief, violence, power, identity, fear, or emotional harm in some form. I pay close attention to how those experiences are being carried through the narrative: whether they remain grounded in character and consequence, whether the emotional weight is being meaningfully supported on the page, and what the reader is actually being asked to experience as they move through the story.

    I also approach this work with the understanding that no single reader can fully stand in for experiences they have not lived. My role is not to flatten complex human experiences into universal approval, but to examine how stories frame perception, consequence, emotional logic, and reader experience on the page.

    My role is not to remove complexity or soften difficult material. It is to help ensure the story is supporting the emotional, structural, and thematic weight it asks the reader to carry.

    When those elements align, stories feel immersive, emotionally coherent, and structurally trustworthy. When they don’t, readers often feel the dissonance long before they can fully articulate why.

  • I’ve worked across commercial and genre fiction throughout my career, including romance, fantasy, mystery, historical fiction, suspense, speculative fiction, young adult, gothic horror, hybrid genres, and long-form storytelling.

    What matters most to me isn’t how neatly a story fits into a category. It’s the strength of the idea, the potential within it, and the author’s willingness to keep developing it.

    I’m drawn to stories that make you want to lean forward and start asking questions—stories with compelling premises, fascinating character dynamics, unexpected possibilities, or the sense that there’s something worth exploring further. Some arrive as polished manuscripts. Others are still evolving, experimenting, or discovering what they want to become.

    I work with authors across traditional, indie, hybrid, serialized, and emerging storytelling spaces. Some stories are designed for traditional publication. Others unfold across long arcs, evolving readerships, or formats that don’t fit neatly within conventional expectations.

    The common thread isn’t genre, platform, or word count. It’s a genuine investment in the work itself. I love collaborating with authors who are excited to explore possibilities, dig deeper into their stories, and keep pushing the work toward what it can become.